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    Monday, April 12, 2010

    When I Say Goodbye

    You’ll be gone soon.



    You’ll be dead



    The day I start to live;



    I’ll drift you away



    Like a feather in space...



    I bid you farewell.


    4 afterthoughts :

    1. Anunoy Samanta said...

      it ended b4 i could feel the initiation of my effort :-P
      nvrmind... waitin 4 ur nxt poem....

    2. Dan* said...

      nice and evil

    3. Absurdist said...

      short but nice one... it ud ve been better if yo had added a few more phrases n lines... a nice one though

    4. VOICE OF PHILOSOPHY said...

      HI friend,

      The sound bits takes one away to unknown lands...but your words sound lacking in hope!

      Take as much hope you want from me and my words! I listen to the mystery ticks from eternity every moment...