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    Saturday, March 28, 2009

    Momentarily...

    A gust of cool breeze

    On a still summer night-

    Suddenly delightful,

    Lifting my soul in your flight.

    I breathe you in

    To keep you a little longer;

    But you slip through my being,

    And I’m alone, yet a little stronger.

    8 afterthoughts :

    1. IceMaiden said...

      very nice!! :)

    2. Arjun said...

      wow man..!! Tat was so good..!! :)

      Lovely Neha..!!

      Cheers..!!
      Arjun

    3. Ashrita said...

      Short, Sweet, Strong!

    4. stuntman mike said...

      its like the sweet memory of an old friend ain't it !

    5. Akansha Agrawal said...

      Reminds me of a quote I read... Sometimes you miss someone so much in your life, that you wish to just pick them up and hug them...

      Nice one... :)

    6. Misty Rhythm said...

      thnx guys :)
      @mike...sometimes u get strength and comfort when u least expect it..dat's wat was on my mind wen i wrote..
      @akansha...dat's such a lovely thought! n i miss sooo many people right now :(...wish i cud pick 'em up n hug them all!

    7. Anonymous said...

      wow so beautiful!!
      loved it from the heart:)

    8. Opaque said...

      My first-time visit here. I loved this piece. Simple yet very effective!!! Good job!!!