Heard in the silence...
Shamelessly expressed,
yet mysteriously hidden so-
Words scattered carelessly,
Tears now threatening to show.
Here I stand before you
Barer than ever before -
I sold my soul to emptiness
Hope- I have no more.
I turn my face away from you,
To not see you turning your back on me;
I dry my tears as fast as I can-
Before you can pretend not to see.
I fiercely hold my words back,
Before you can act aloof;
And drown myself in irrelevance
My scars, the only remaining proof.
I watch you sleep blissfully
While I die a little each day,
I close my eyes and speak to the silence
Of everything you didn’t let me say.
9 afterthoughts :
I don't know why... But this poem has an amazing after effect. And instantly there is White Flag by Dido playing in my mind... I don't know why!
Great work girl, lovely poem. Very "From-The-Heart"!!
it's beautiful how we take pleasure in pain. it knows no stopping. i guess it is safer this way, maybe i won't know how to react to times rosy and happy. maybe then, i would be unable to appreciate poetry like this.
Hey! Seconding the above opinions. U hav no idea wht reading tht poem felt like to me... felt lik i was redaing my own thoughts.. picturing me n someone who recently stamped all over my heart.. n left. :| Its very difficult to hear someone say "I know hw to feel".. cz most of the time i feel like wht d heck r u talking abt?! u dunno one damn thing!!
n here i am... reading my exact thoughts from the writings of a stranger. So very straight from the heart. Amazing!!
n loved the new songs!! :)
Cheers,
Annie.
Hi, i think i join your club.. and Ice Maidens too, these are the situations in life that makes one bitter to a certain extent..
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@satan's darling....i luv white flag :), thnx so much!
@mike...i wudn't be driven to write if thr was no pain. yes, things wud be strange if it were to be all rosy!but dat's life i guess - a bit of everything, n sometimes a little too much...
@ice maiden...it's strangely comforting to know u understand how i feel...n i wish u come out of this mess hail n hearty :)
@workhard...bitter...hmm well maybe not. hopeless, yes.
the peom shall I say rhymes well to convey one of the most innermost feelings ...and grabs the reader into the position of "I" in the poem ..Though I felt for as it does have a sad tone.. but hearing it I can judge you had written this with ur eyes wide closed..
cheers !
It's really awesome to represent ur deep & innermost feeling into words...
Superb Work...
Words weave magic when put together this way.
Extremely beautiful.
Ouch! That hurts.
Kisses.
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